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2008年6月28日雅思A类考试范文

http://www.canachieve.com.cn 发布日期:2009-11-16


  近期雅思学术类的题目喜欢在旧题基础上加一些变化,但是其实只要对于各类考题有足够的认识,这些变化并不是很难,相反,还可以很容易的套用某些常见的观点。例如昨天的这题目,两个关键词都是很常见的:old people和new technology。

  一般来说,技术的优点可以从三方面讲:速度,方便和享受。

  任何技术的进步和升级也都是以这三个词作为目的。老年人的使用新技术,也无疑要从这些方面入手。鼓励老年人使用新技术,可以从政府角度入手,资助和鼓励他们去使用。

  其次,这个题目的特点是有两个问,这种题目一般写5段,2段对应第一问,一段对应第二问,而且主次最好分清楚,此题显然写技术的好处容易写到2段,而如何鼓励老年人就可以只写一段,写政府的某些动作,例如免费上网啊免费手机什么的。然后进行结尾就可以了。对于这种叙述和议论结合的文章,我们还要注意不能太单调,要有一些比较生活化的例子。

  下面是雅思写作主讲陈国辉为滴答网撰写的独家例文:

  In what ways could mobile phone and the internet be useful to old people?

  How can old people be encouraged to use new technology?

  The history of the Homo Sapiens Sapiens is also the history of technological development in every walk of our life, e.g. our routine work has fostered many original ideas, our most common application of fire may evolve from a pine torch into a finely-decorated gas stove or an electrical one, these examples can be listed incessantly. However, in most cases, old people failed to enjoy the fruit of those improvements due to their slow mind or pale mentality or even their well-fitted mode of past days ,within which the elderly feel unnecessary to adapt to new technology, especially the mobile phones and internet.

  Internet can be very applicable and useful to the aged. For instance, they can have access to the latest ways of keeping health, without taking health for granted in the old age.

  Similarly, mobile phones can keep them quite well informed with their kinsmen, give them much more chances to communicate with their offspring, which can be very useful in preventing them from becoming bored or getting ill. Both ways of technology can be entertaining them as well, since most mobile phones can act as a recorder or radio as well, not saying the omnipotent Internet and computer.

  Governments will surely be the main supporter to encourage its senior citizens to access these new technological advancements. In most cases a free access can be the most welcomed way for any person. Free mobile handsets can be delivered amongst some charitable houses , free internet access can also be installed for aged people’s privilege.

  With all efforts from the government, we can expect a greater future of the application of mobile phones and Internet among the elderly, which can be very useful and applicable in both communication and enjoyment. [实习编辑:熠]

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