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  (2)暗喻:比喻词不出现。

  America has given the Negro people a bad check, which has come back marked insufficient funds.

  3. 对照:加深印象

  Extremism in defense of liberty is no vice; moderation is the pursuit of justice is no virtue.

  4. 类比

  The Negro has a callus growing on his soul and it is getting harder and harder to hurt him here. That is a simple law of nature. Like a callus on the foot in a shoe that is too tight. The foot is nature’s and that shoe was put on by man. The tight shoe will pinch your foot and make you holler and scream. But sooner or later, if you do not take the shoe off, a callus will form on the foot and begin to wear out the shoe.

  It is the same with the Negro in America. That shoe-the white man’s system—has pinched and rubbed and squeezed his soul until it has almost destroyed him. But it did not. And how a callus has formed on his soul, and unless that system is adjusted to fit him, too, that callus is going to wear our that system.

  5. 拟人

  Dawn was beginning to prowl about the sky and put out the starts.

  6. 夸张

  For she was beautiful—her beauty made the bright world dim, and everything beside seemed like the fleeting image of a shade.

  四、文体恰当

  1. 少用Be动词等静态词

  A common characteristic of developing countries is an inadequate supply of food. Inadequate food supply is the leading cause of malnutrition. Malnutrition is the condition in which the immune system is weakened and resistance to disease is lowered. There are over 500 million children in developing countries who are malnourished. As a result, one is seven is dead before the age of five. Due to this high rate of infant mortality, in some societies naming of children is a ceremony that is not performed until the child has survived for some specified period of time.

  Developing countries characteristically lack adequate food supplies. This inadequacy causes malnutrition, which wakens the immune system and lowers resistance to disease. Over 500 million children in developing countries suffer from malnutrition. As a result, one in seven dies before the age of five. Due to this high rate of infant mortality, some societies postpone naming children until the child has survived for some specified period.

  2. 少用被动语态

  Last year it was recommended by the student government that a board of review be created so that students would be given a greater voice in campus governance. The proposal was accepted by the faculty, the president, and the board of trustees. A nine-member board of review was authorized, to be elected by students and faculty. College policies are reviewed by the board and, if they are determined to be inconsistent with the basic purpose of the college, must be revised unless the board’s decision is vetoed by the president.

  Last year the student government recommended that the school create a board of review to give students a greater voice in student governance. The faculty, the president, and the board of trustees accepted the proposal and authorized a nine-member board of review, elected by faculty and students. The board reviews college policies to determine whether any are inconsistent with the basic purpose of the college. The college must revise any policy the board recommends, unless the president vetoes the board’s decision.

  3. 使用正规文体

  (1) don’t, mustn’t, he’s, I’ve

  do not, must not, he is, I have

  (2) You never know what new measures the President will have.

  One never knows what new measures the President will take.

  (3) Who is the secretary talking with?

  With whom is the secretary talking?

  (4) I think it’s a good idea.

  I think that it is a good idea.

  (5) Anyone can take a brochure if they want it.

  Anyone can take a brochure if he or she wants it.

  (everybody, someone, somebody, anyone, anybody, no one, nobody)

  (6) The old lady treated him as if he was her own son.

  The old lady treated him as if he were her own son.

  (7) The team was badly defeated in the match, and they returned in low spirits.

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