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范例14.1 提要

申请者概况

男，大学金融专业毕业，在投资证券公司工作四年全奖去加拿大读MBA，但是在获得全奖前已经申请了加拿大独立移民因此有公证过的赤裸裸的移民倾向

拒签理由

没有被拒签，但是由于被拒的可能极高所以在提交学生签证申请的同时写一封信给签证官说明情况让签证官理解并支持自己的申请，结果一次性获得了通过

申诉重点

详细说明自己申请留学和移民的先后顺序先不知道有移民的机会存在，所以办留学，办到一半发现有移民的机会， 所以就申请移民但是申请了移民并不等于一定可以得到移民，所以也不能放弃留学的机会如果因为我申请了加拿大永久居民就拒绝我学习的机会，并无人能够保证批准我的移民所以这个拒签对我就不公平。

作为成功守法的金融专家，如果能移民就在加拿大发财，如果不能移民就回中国掘金那里合法就在那里居住，所以不用担心给我学生签证我就会非法赖在加拿大不走虽然加拿大是我想去的地方，但中国同样也是我成功的土地，我的前途在哪里都一样光明


范例14.2 原文

Dear Visa Officer ,

In support to my student visa application, I am writing to explain my particular situation to you.

Graduated from China’s top university for finance training program, Renmin University, I have been working as a Foreign Currency Exchange Dealer at China ABC Trust & Investment Corp for four years since graduation. With a fascinating job, a decent compensation package, a high social status and a comfortable life in Beijing though, I am always aware of that if I am to promote my career into a world standard, an MBA specialized in finance from North American universities is invaluable.

With this idea in mind I started my preparation for a North American MBA program two years ago and took GMAT in April, 1996. During the lengthy and boring procedure I never thought that there is an opportunity available for me to apply for Independent Immigration to Canada and to work as a foreign exchange dealer in Canada. I would LOVE to become a permanent resident in Canada and surf the world class financial wave in Toronto’s financial community. However, unaware of such an opportunity my only plan was to get myself gold-plated with a North American MBA and then come back to China digging my gold. I love Canada, but I don’t see a good reason to stay there and just for the sake of staying there if I do not have a permanent status allowing me to work in my professional field legally in Canada. The only thing in my mind was to get an MBA at that time.

My ideas and future plan was changed in the summer of 1996 when I heard the news about Canadian Independent Immigration program. With the help of an immigration consulting firm, I filed my application on August 1, 1997(file number: B 123 456 789). I know my professional skills are needed in Canada and I can develop a great career in Canada because of my skills in financial field.

However, on the other hand, my application for immigration is sitting in your Embassy’s office. It may take another year to finalize the case. And

most importantly and I think you also agree, there is a chance for my immigration application being refused. Therefore, I can not rely my life on the uncertainty of my immigration future. If the visa officer decided that my qualification for Independent immigration is not good enough, I then will return to my company and continue to dig my gold in China, instead of in my intended country of destination, Canada.

For the above understandable reason, I continued my application for MBA admission even after my immigration was submitted. And to my stunning surprise and greatest proud, the highly prestigious University of British Columbia offered me a full fellowship! That is an honor that is extremely valuable to me.

Eager to test my talent in Canada’s financial market and make a fortune if my immigration application gets approved, I am not crazy for a degree in Canada or if I do need it I can accomplish it studying weekends. But a MBA degree from Renmin University will mean a huge lot more to my future if I bring it back to China and work here permanently.

Now you know I am caught in a catch-22: For a better future in China, I need an MBA from North America; for an independent immigrant, I should not have applied as a student. I can not give up my MBA opportunity because my immigration application is not guaranteed; and because there is no guarantee for my immigration then a refusal to my student visa just on basis of my open immigration intention will be NOT fair because it depresses my future in China.

I am a successful and well-off young professional in China’s emerging financial industry. I am confident that I can work in my field in Canada as successful as I have been in China if I do get my immigration visa. If by any chance a visa officer does not approve my immigration application, with all due regret I can still make a great career in my field, particularly if I have a MBA from such North American schools like UBC.

Therefore, I respectfully request that you grant me my student visa application to allow me attend UBC MBA program. If in the future Canada give me the permanent status, I will be living and working inCanada for good and if not, I will be coming back to China because of what I have achieved so far in China.

Your general consideration is much appreciated.

Sincerely,

PS. My MBA program at UBC takes only one and half year. It is highly possible that by the time my landing paper expires, my program will have finished for several months.

　

范例14.3 翻译

尊敬的签证官：

我写这封信，是为我的签证申请向您解释我的一些特别情况。

毕业于中国最有名的训练金融专才的学校，中国人民大学，我作为中国ABC信托投资公司的外汇交易员已经工作了四年之久。我有一个迷人的工作，体面的收入，优越的社会地位，以及在北京的舒适的生活，然而，我也非常明白一件事：如果我想把我的职业推向世界水平的话，一个北美的MBA学位对于我是无价的。

带着这样的心愿，我在两年前开始申请北美的MBA，并于1996年4月考过了GMAT。在这个漫长而枯燥无味的申请过程中，我从来没有想到存在一种机会，我可以以独立移民的身份申请移民加拿大并在加拿大做一份外汇交易员的工作。我当然渴望成为一个加拿大永久居民，投入多伦多金融行业的海洋中去遨游。但是，由于不知道这样的机会存在，我从前唯一的计划只是去北美拿一个镀金的MBA然后回中国来掘金。我热爱加拿大，但是我看不出有任何理由硬要呆在加拿大只是为了呆在那里，如果我没有永久居民的身份允许我合法地在加拿大从事我的专业工作的话。当时我心中唯一的想法就是拿一个MBA。

我的想法和未来计划有了变化，1996年的夏天, 当我听到了关于加拿大独立移民的消息之后。 在一个移民咨询公司的协助下，我在1996年8月1日向加拿大提交了我的移民申请（立案号码：B 123 456 789）。我知道，加拿大需要我的专业知识，由于我在金融领域里的经验，我有能力在加拿大开创我的事业。

但是，从另一个角度，我的移民申请此时正躺在你们的办公室等待处理。也许还要再等一年才能结案。最重要的是，我想你们也会同意，我的移民申请也是有可能遭到拒绝的。所以，我不能够把我的生活全部放在不确定的移民前途上。如果签证官认为我的资格不够成为加拿大永久居民，我将回到我的公司继续在中国掘我的金，取代我心目中的国家，加拿大。

鉴于上述的可以理解的理由，我在提交了移民申请之后，还是继续着我的MBA的申请工作。 使我大吃一惊并极其骄傲的是，加拿大著名的哥伦比亚大学给了我一个完整的奖学金。这对我是一个实在太珍贵的荣誉。

渴望着在获得移民签证后去加拿大的金融市场检验我的才能并发财致富（MAKE A FORTUNE），我并不一定真的对一个加拿大的学历执着入迷，如果非要不可

我也可以通过业余时间拿到这个学位。但是，UBC的一个MBA学位对我的前途将有极大的价值，如果我带着它回到中国并在那里永久工作的话。

现在你知道我陷入了一个进退两难的困境（KATCH 22, 第二十二条军规）。 为了在中国的前程，我需要一个北美的MBA；而作为一个移民申请者，我又不应该申请学生签证。我不能够放弃我读MBA的机会，因为我的移民申请并没有成功的保证；而由于我的移民没有成功的保证，那么如果基于我公开的移民倾向而拒绝我的学生签证对我就不公平，因为这将压抑我在中国的前途。

我是中国新兴的金融市场上一个成功、满足的年轻专业人员。我相信如果我得到加拿大永久居民身份的话，在加拿大我这个领域里我将干得和我在中国一样成功。万一签证官不批准我的移民申请，我虽然会非常遗憾但是我仍然可以在中国创造伟大前程，尤其是当我获得象UBC这样一个北美学府的MBA学位之后。

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